"Uoy evol I"

Red roses, Pink trees,

Green coffee, Blue cheese.

You rock my world,

You blow my mind.



Birds barking, Cats flying,

Snow shining, Sun raining.

You rock my world,

You blow my mind.



Wake up at night, Sleep at daylight,

Realise darkness, dream and fight.

You rock my world,

You blow my mind.



Drink bread, Eat water,

Summer is cold, Winter is hotter.

You rock my world,

You blow my mind.

Written by me.. Nad Mrbt..

bravo nadech 7low ce poeme

i liked it especially that you write "YOU" in the right place you even didn't use the "I"... every thing was done and caused by the "YOU".again a very funny poem

thank YOU

you are welcome

By the way, it is not supposed to be a funny poem. It is supposed to be a love poem. You see, "You rock my world" is an African American slung which means "I'm in love with you". And "You blow my mind" means "You and your love are driving me crazy". That's why everything seems up- side- down. It's like I'm so in love to the point that I can't see anything clearly or say a meaningful sentence.



PS: you don't seem 67 at all..

<3<3<3
j'ai trop apprécié ce poème, il est trop émouvant, j'ai bien aimé ton style surtout dans ce poème ainsi que la manière par laquelle tu as décrit le pouvoir de l'amour ^^ ce sentiment qui métamorphose les individus ainsi que le monde autour de nous, un pouvoir disons "magique" ^^ comme dit El Fehem "yem3ssou ma3ssen, yo3srou 3asran, ytarchgou tarchgan" :pp ( dsl pr l'utilisation du texto)

Bonne continuation notre poète =))

"yem3ssou ma3ssen, yo3srou 3asran, ytarchgou tarchgan"

loool oué
cette phrase dit tout

wow! so expressive and funny good work little poet

little?
thanks

loool "little" here does not have a pejorative meaning. Generally poets are a little bit aged; it's rare to find such a beautiful, wise, 20-years old poet ) really amazing

hhhhh ok
tawa nfakhtni :p :p :p

FUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNYYYYY

you're insisting, ha?
ok lady, funny it is!

9arwia 7orra a écrit:

By the way, it is not supposed to be a funny poem. It is supposed to be a love poem. You see, "You rock my world" is an African American slung which means "I'm in love with you". And "You blow my mind" means "You and your love are driving me crazy". That's why everything seems up- side- down. It's like I'm so in love to the point that I can't see anything clearly or say a meaningful sentence.



PS: you don't seem 67 at all..

[b]

you are right my friend

bint blad a écrit:

9arwia 7orra a écrit:

By the way, it is not supposed to be a funny poem. It is supposed to be a love poem. You see, "You rock my world" is an African American slung which means "I'm in love with you". And "You blow my mind" means "You and your love are driving me crazy". That's why everything seems up- side- down. It's like I'm so in love to the point that I can't see anything clearly or say a meaningful sentence.



PS: you don't seem 67 at all..

[b]

you are right my friend

am not 67 !!!!